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Anybody good at writing lyrics here?!

Okay, I'm working on a new song and I'm fcking angry xd No, I'm just annoyed cause I'm out of creativityyyyyyyyyyy :'(

Now... The song is a badass and gangster song :P

This is the beat: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=528262&songID=1...

Here is a little demo without effects: https://www.dropbox.com/s/pi0ouvtqon0vyud/Killuminati_%20-%20I%20am%20Th...

You will hear the chorus and 2 sentences of verse and then I'm just fcking stuckkkkk :s

I also don't really like the chorus as it is now. It's like.. boring. NOT SATISFIED!! :s

 

Lyrics of the chorus:

Trying so hard to bring me down

I know that you try to get my style

Doing my thing

So just get aways

Cause I am the G

Obsessed by me, thinking of me

Chasing me 24/7

I ain't got no time

So just calm the fuck down

Cause I am the GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!

 

Okay, so let me know if you have any ideas how to complete the song!!

Loveee

 

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I writed song when i were young, but it was in french =/

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Hi!

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If you gotta do something, do it with a lot of drugs.

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Killu can sing some part in french Racuine :)

Let's believe that, don't scratch your level Victor Hugo Boy !

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l11GyqVu_-o

Here are your lyrics, be glad please,

Sing it with your Slovak accent

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RaCuiNe wrote:

I writed song when i were young, but it was in french =/

Okay, write and I'll translate it :P

I will be gone, practicing my profession proudly, whereas you will continue noliving around.
I will be gone, but my songs will stay here, whereas you will be gone forever.

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Cocky Burek wrote:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0icQ5CgaZP4

Bad boy Cockyyyy!! What is thisss :D

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I will be gone, but my songs will stay here, whereas you will be gone forever.

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Concombre wrote:

Killu can sing some part in french Racuine :)

Let's believe that, don't scratch your level Victor Hugo Boy !

Hmm, my French is actually not that bad. So why not xd hahah :D

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Babibibababi wrote:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l11GyqVu_-o

Here are your lyrics, be glad please,

Sing it with your Slovak accent

Babibbiibabbiibibibbi xd Nooooooo, no Slovakkkkk :'(

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Btw, this is the beat: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=528262&songID=1...

So hotttttttttttttttttt :'( I want to write on thisssss :(

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I will be gone, but my songs will stay here, whereas you will be gone forever.

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ok, love dat beat *-*

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https://www.dropbox.com/s/pi0ouvtqon0vyud/Killuminati_%20-%20I%20am%20Th...

This is a little demo without effects.

You will hear the chorus and 2 sentences of verse and then I'm just fcking stuckkkkk :s

I also don't really like the chorus. It's like.. boring. NOT SATISFIED!! :s

So let me know if you have any ideas how to complete the song!!

I will be gone, practicing my profession proudly, whereas you will continue noliving around.
I will be gone, but my songs will stay here, whereas you will be gone forever.

- Killuminati_

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Yeah Nice beaaaat :)
You should also let a Gangster Boy sing in your song, ask Eminem xD

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Nananana that's it, that's it :D

Nice work!

My name is Jeff.

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Awww, you're not singing with Tyler the Creator, too bad, too bad, not gangsta' enough for me,

I'll go back to my Gold Sould Theory  :(

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sam_pum wrote:

Nananana that's it, that's it :D

Nice work!

Hahaha yea xd

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Awww, you're not singing with Tyler the Creator, too bad, too bad, not gangsta' enough for me,

I'll go back to my Gold Sould Theory  :(

Wuuutttt not gangsta enoughhhh?? :( I'm not the one with the username babibibibabiabibibiiiii xd

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I ain't gangsta, but you can make "Curve Radio edit" 

 

 

I'm curving on edges, looking around

Waiting for chance to victory sound

Doing my thing

Getting that „7”

Cause I am the G
The genius winner

Playing 24/7

I ain't got time

Just let me camp that

And get the fuck out

 

xD

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Killuminati_ wrote:

Babibibababi wrote:

Awww, you're not singing with Tyler the Creator, too bad, too bad, not gangsta' enough for me,

I'll go back to my Gold Sould Theory  :(

Wuuutttt not gangsta enoughhhh?? :( I'm not the one with the username babibibibabiabibibiiiii xd

 

Waat ?! attacking my name, given to me by my grandparents ?

Such a tiny thing ! :|

If you spell my nickname, and tell it properly, you may find some kind of harmony in it.

 

Yeah..., "kind of"...

 

Babu, gangsta' specialist of harmony and anthropy

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Suerte wrote:

I ain't gangsta, but you can make "Curve Radio edit" 

 

 

I'm curving on edges, looking around

Waiting for chance to victory sound

Doing my thing

Getting that „7”

Cause I am the G
The genius winner

Playing 24/7

I ain't got time

Just let me camp that

And get the fuck out

 

xD

No sweety nooo.. This is totally the wrong way you are going xd this isn't meant to be a Curve song. That already exists and I couldn't make that any better so.. :P

Now look.. You have to think like a G to write this song xd

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I will be gone, but my songs will stay here, whereas you will be gone forever.

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Some sincere advice: Delete that.

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nML wrote:

Some sincere advice: Delete that.

And then nML is like "everybody hates me".. Yea why is that so actually? -_-

Just shut up nML.

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Since when is open criticism a crime that you are burned for?

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nML wrote:

Since when is open criticism a crime that you are burned for?

Start writing lyrics -_-

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Well, I must admit that this text has caused the tears in my eyes, it's is so ambitious, full of instructions for modern, lost society, people should give up reading such works as "White Nights" by Dostoyevsky or the study of literature from the pen of Krishnamurti, that's all rubbish in comparison with the depth of this text. I am full of admiration, and my heart is shrouded in the shadow of envy, because such craft's writing, well we do not see this every day. A similar style of writing I've seen only in my 8-year-old cousin, who was born with a 80 IQ points. I have to admit, I had already read a lot of texts, so you can recognize that I am an expert in this field. But, my delight was only disturbed by the words "I know that you try to get my style," which may indicate exuberant ego of the author, and the total lack of modesty. Continue writing, I predict a bright future but you have to remember not to change your style, then you can with these amazing skills compete for employ as a housekeeper. Yours faithfully, hateuall.

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I'm sorry Killu, if you wish to sing some jazz, I might help, but here I armless :(

 

HateUall, that was a beautiful explanation. Well, next time put some spaces, because it's hard to read. And I'm sorry for Dostoyevsky and Krishnamurti but please, don't be a jerk.
That being said, I saw that you had some good taste in litterature, what do you think of Thomas Pynchon and T.S. Eliiot ? I like those two guys *-*

See you boy.

Your devoted, Babi'buchi

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HATE YOU ALL. wrote:

Well, I must admit that this text has caused the tears in my eyes, it's is so ambitious, full of instructions for modern, lost society, people should give up reading such works as "White Nights" by Dostoyevsky or the study of literature from the pen of Krishnamurti, that's all rubbish in comparison with the depth of this text. I am full of admiration, and my heart is shrouded in the shadow of envy, because such craft's writing, well we do not see this every day. A similar style of writing I've seen only in my 8-year-old cousin, who was born with a 80 IQ points. I have to admit, I had already read a lot of texts, so you can recognize that I am an expert in this field. But, my delight was only disturbed by the words "I know that you try to get my style," which may indicate exuberant ego of the author, and the total lack of modesty. Continue writing, I predict a bright future but you have to remember not to change your style, then you can with these amazing skills compete for employ as a housekeeper. Yours faithfully, hateuall.

I'm not a poet. What I do is sing songs and not reading a poems. Literature is different. Ofcourse some songs have very nice lyrics, but you also have songs with only "where have you been all my life"/"we found love in a hopeless place"/"What's my name"/etc. repeated by the artist like 6 times.

And about the song itself. When you hear the beat you are not going to write about a shy little girl being in love with a good little boy. When you hear it, you just think: bad, G, hard, tough, etc. So ofc the song will be about a girl who is confident, tough and superior. I'm not saying that I am all of these things, cause I think that you attack me that I feel like that. The things I sing and I write doesn't have to be particularly true for myself even though yes some of the things are typically me.

So that's the concept of the song and there is nothing to judge about it actually. Why so worried? It's just a song that I wrote and recorded.

And hey.. Read again. I'm not asking for any advice whether the concept of the song is okay. I'm asking for people that can help me with writing lyrics.

Thank you.

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I will be gone, but my songs will stay here, whereas you will be gone forever.

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Killuminati_ wrote:

[...]you are not going to write about a shy little girl being in love with a good little boy[...]

 

You mean ? Lana del Rey ? :secret:

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The fact that there are singers who are satisfied with singing about  the umbrellas is really embarrassing argument, this type of treatment only withdraw in the development of society, it remains for me nothing but congratulate you extremely high ambition manifested a desire to catch up with this particular habit, but what shall we expect of a person who wrote so poor in spiritual sensations text. With thinking "it's just a song" you won’t go very far as musician, music is a balm for the soul, elaborate elevation tear-off letter from the greyness of everyday life, the music must be celebrated, blessed, glorified! As a musician, you should thoroughly understand it, if not, it is better to leave it to someone who at least won’t harm it. The music you create can only contemplate the dark, slow thinking masses whose minds would not be able to comprehend more ambitious words. If you can’t write don’t write, it's so easy :) Better to hire someone else, you will save yourself embarrassment. And the fact that music is associated with something strong does not mean that it must be so retarded, I think on this subject it could be formulated a lot more brilliant insights. Anyway, have fun at depriving people of the aesthetic senses and withdraw their mental development. Respectfully, hateuall.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lV7xuYlxf70

Here is what you wanted to say. [:-}

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HATE YOU ALL. wrote:

The fact that there are singers who are satisfied with singing about  the umbrellas is really embarrassing argument, this type of treatment only withdraw in the development of society, it remains for me nothing but congratulate you extremely high ambition manifested a desire to catch up with this particular habit, but what shall we expect of a person who wrote so poor in spiritual sensations text. With thinking "it's just a song" you won’t go very far as musician, music is a balm for the soul, elaborate elevation tear-off letter from the greyness of everyday life, the music must be celebrated, blessed, glorified! As a musician, you should thoroughly understand it, if not, it is better to leave it to someone who at least won’t harm it. The music you create can only contemplate the dark, slow thinking masses whose minds would not be able to comprehend more ambitious words. If you can’t write don’t write, it's so easy :) Better to hire someone else, you will save yourself embarrassment. And the fact that music is associated with something strong does not mean that it must be so retarded, I think on this subject it could be formulated a lot more brilliant insights. Anyway, have fun at depriving people of the aesthetic senses and withdraw their mental development. Respectfully, hateuall.

I just make music as a hobby. I don't want to go far. It's just do it for myself.

Even though we don't have the same opinion about this song, I respect your opinion and I understand your insight. You don't have to love every song. You have your own opinion and I have mine. I'm not asking you to judge my music. I make it and if I'm satisfied with it then I'm happy. That's what is important to me. Others might like it or not. No problem.

I like the way you write, it's creative and well-explained, but you lost my respect by saying that I save myself embarrassment, the song is retarded etc. Such a pitty that you have to break people down like this. That doesn't really suit the way you write. idk why you lower your level like that.

Anyway thanks for listening, reading the lyrics and for your feedback.

I will be gone, practicing my profession proudly, whereas you will continue noliving around.
I will be gone, but my songs will stay here, whereas you will be gone forever.

- Killuminati_

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Well, I must admit that this text has caused the tears in my eyes, it's is so ambitious, full of instructions for modern, lost society, people should give up reading such works as "White Nights" by Dostoyevsky or the study of literature from the pen of Krishnamurti, that's all rubbish in comparison with the depth of this text. I am full of admiration, and my heart is shrouded in the shadow of envy, because such craft's writing, well we do not see this every day. A similar style of writing I've seen only in my 8-year-old cousin, who was born with a 80 IQ points. I have to admit, I had already read a lot of texts, so you can recognize that I am an expert in this field. But, my delight was only disturbed by the words "I know that you try to get my style," which may indicate exuberant ego of the author, and the total lack of modesty. Continue writing, I predict a bright future but you have to remember not to change your style, then you can with these amazing skills compete for employ as a housekeeper. Yours faithfully, hateuall.

 

 

It would be a pleasure if I could curve with you someday *drinks*

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Killuminati_ wrote:

Cocky Burek wrote:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0icQ5CgaZP4

Bad boy Cockyyyy!! What is thisss :D

was trying to give u some gangsta inspiration withda shiat from balkaan xD

If you gotta do something, do it with a lot of drugs.

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Gizem, are you serious? If you want feedback for these lyrics, then the only valid and honest answer is that they are bullshit. Get over it. Given that you only want to sing a random song for fun, why ask for help? (My advice was btw meant serious, this oughtn't draw attention towards it.) Writing good lyrics needs years of practise that you apparently don't have.

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Read the title again of this topic. If you are not what I'm searching then don't comment.

I'm not asking whether the song is good. I'm not asking for feedback. I'm not asking whether the concept or whatever is good enough.

Understood?

Thank you.

 

If you don't like it, don't comment. It's that simple.

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I will be gone, but my songs will stay here, whereas you will be gone forever.

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Since when do you cry that much?

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nML wrote:

Since when do you cry that much?

I'm the one who is crying? :D Okay..

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Yes, you are.